Dear
Ryan,
Hey! Remember me, Faith! My mission is going
great. Australia is beautiful. I wanted to tell you my crazy adventure. It all started when my friend and I went on a
safari. We passed a lot of orange
flowers
on the way and the streets were very dusty and wide. Then we came past what looked like a log. I
walked towards it. It was a... crocodile!
I collapsed as I rushed towards the
jeep. Within a minute we drove off, I
could not believe I was an inch away from the crocodile’s head. I will never
forget it, hope you write soon.
-Love-Faith
I love your idea of writing it into a letter and the mistakes I found were just little bits. The sentence of yours, Australia Is beautiful, you accidentally capitalized 'is'. And when you wrote, Within a minute drove off, you forgot the word 'we' so it should read. Within a minute we drove off.
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