“You are Nature “
There it stands, a pot with legs? Okay, so it does seem weird. But I assure you it’s not what it seems. In 1873, a young aboriginal man loved the saying, "Humans are a part of
nature too",and in exactly that year the man died. He had a son. He was also growing around the same saying. His son missed his dad so much he decided to
make his favorite saying into a sculpture.
There it stood in the middle of England in Saint James Park “Humans are
apart or nature too” I miss you!
I would put a comma between, There it stands _____ a pot with legs?
ReplyDeleteWhen you wrote, But I usher you it's not what it seems, the words not 'usher' it's 'assure'. In 1873, there should be a comma after 1873. And in exactly that year in 1873 the man died. I don't think you need the part in 1873. So it should be and in exactly that year, the man died.
ReplyDeleteBut good story!
You forgot 2 commas. 1st is right after- In 1873 a young aboriginal man loved the saying___- The 2nd one is after " Humans are a part of nature too_____"
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