The
Hand:
A long time ago a
giant from the Underworld had given a way to take control of the Underworld.
All he had to do was crush this tree with his bare hands. But if you knew this
giant you would know he was the harshest giant that lived. If he taken over the
giant’s Underworld most of the giants will become slaves. But his brother could
not let this happen. He had to stab him before he crushes the tree and takes
over the Underworld. Right there once the giant was reaching up from the Underworld to crush the tree his brother stabbed him. There he is today turned
into stone.
A long time ago a giant from the underworld had given a way to take control of the underworld. Underworld should be capitalized. Also maybe rephrase it to read, A long time ago a giant from the Underworld had been given a way to take control. This sentence, If he taken over the giant’s underworld most of the giants will become slaves. Change it to read, If he took over the Underworld, most of the giants would become slaves.
ReplyDeleteHe had to stab him before he crushes the tree and takes over the underworld.
Before he crushed the tree and took control.